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Forward Lies A Beacon
By Tina

As I travel down this lonesome road
That is better known as life
I once again encounter
A crossroad....filled with strife

I can choose to journey forth
Not knowing where I'm bound
Or return to what I know already
Just by slowly turning round

Forward lies a beacon
Emitting warmth and light
Behind me lies a broken heart
And blackness like the night

The decision should be easy
But I struggle with the choice
"Are you really brave enough"
Whispers a soft and lonely voice

I turn and look behind me
Recalling all that could have been
Can I rewrite what has happened
If I just try again?

Once again I turn around
The beacon is still shining
Can I trust this cloud
To have a silver lining?

As I stand there looking
At the loving light before me
I realize that the past is gone
And my heart is suddenly set free

I can't be sure what lies ahead
But I know what I believe
The beacon will forever guide me
And for the past I will not grieve
©2001-2009 ~aftershock522
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written in responce to themadpoet....

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:iconyuukansan:

oooooh beautiful, i said to my self when i finished reading this. the poetry you produce is awsome, sometimes i forget i'm even reading it, and become caught up in it, and the poetry becomes all i see... this poem is amazing
:icontwilight-ashes:
this is an excellent poem. the flow is just wonderful. nice imagery as well.
good job! keep it up :) (Smile)
:iconfaithwalker:
Go toward the light!

A most moving and insightful work!
Send more!

Faithwalker

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:iconjokerman:
This is a poem that totally speaks the truth. When you reach the crossroads in your life. It's time to decide that which you fear most......change. Beautifully written Tina. . .

The past is but a memory...
The present is the now...
The future goes on forever...

Stay Deviant!!!

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I AM SOFA KING WE TALL DID!!!
:icondreamz13:
That's a beautiful and touching poem. I'm glad that you've find yourself a soulmate, your shining beacon in the seas of life.

8) (Cool) Dream on... 8) (Cool)
:icondor:
aftershock, I must have missed this one by you and it has to be the most beautiful one of all from you! very good!
dreamz13 has said it all for me too
:icondryspyder:
Another good poem....

I would honestly run out of words after my first poem, but you keep going...like a MACHINE!!!!!

--
.ds; Each day we die a little more...
:iconcroniee:
Awesome poem, I am a poet myself, although I do not share it any longer just because it breaks me to see it ignored, so I leave it all in my journals. Anyhow this is a greatly written poem. What a great struggle, its either you stay with the darker side of you, never to forgive waht has been and live life miserably, which is quite tempting nontheless or reach for something new and maybe better. Really well written. Good work.

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R.F.M. - "If you tremble indignation at every injustice then you are a comrade of mine." -Che-

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